Battle

Exceptional rendering style and lighting. But I feel it's missing proper focus. There are a lot of focal points, but to me the more glaring focal point could be the soldier to the right looking at us. I think you could detail that out (or whatever your desired focal point would be) and that would change the focus of the painting to something more obvious. Just my thoughts... Like I said, it's really great, technically. But the actual composition and "purpose" of it falls short.